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What
can I say about Rika’s Alliance? I’ve done quite a few wedding
stories now, and there are more to come. Ultimately, I still need to get
Chrístõ and Julia married in Theta Sigma. This is a fairly
straightforward story, mostly told from Rika’s point of view, which
is the one unusual thing about it. Most of the stories are from Marion’s
perspective. A few are from Kristoph’s side of it all. A very few
stories come from other angles. The story Rika’s Parents was. So
is this.
We start with Rika waking up at the Lodge and then going to the Dower
House to get ready for her wedding. We see her astonishment when she is
dressed in silk covered in diamonds. Then she travels again to Mount Lœng
House and a wedding bower under an enviro-dome in the garden and a traditional
twelve hour ceremony to unite her with Remonte.
Oldblood weddings, of course, are meant to be in the Panopticon in front
of the Lord High President. This one is held at home because Remonte is
only recently a widower, not because Rika is a Caretaker. Yes, it is.
Don’t go thinking otherwise. Besides, the President turns up to
the wedding in the end!
I drew out part of the story with descriptions of the rain and then the
sunlight on the enviro dome, and then the setting sun. Having set the
wedding in the open air – nearly – it was only reasonable
that the weather should be mentioned as a feature.
Then, of course, when the wedding was over, there was a bedroom scene.
This was very much a Mills and Boon bedroom scene, ending just as Remonte
begins to undress his bride and admire the satin lingerie beneath her
finery. Again, one or two people found it a bit too passionate. But some
people really need to get a grip on themselves.
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